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My bf is a 'sweater'

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發表於 10-6-2011 23:09:59 | 顯示全部樓層 |閱讀模式
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發表於 11-6-2011 01:19:41 | 顯示全部樓層
本帖最後由 Kenathyc軒 於 11-6-2011 01:26 編輯
He really sweats crazy in summer, and he has a little smell too.
I wanna buy him some deodorant for  ...
kasee 發表於 10-6-2011 23:09


I want to point out few mistakes before I answer your question. You use crazy to describe his sweat, so you have to use adverb, which is crazily in your sentence. Moreover, you should use deodorants rather than deodorant in this case. I think you know the reason.=)



I think it is better to say "to prevent he sweats exceedingly" ( In this case, sweat is use as a verb ) because "make less sweat" ( sweating is not a noun) is a bit weird and sounds like "Chinglish"


Okay, I would recommend the brand "Playboy" or "Addidas" to you. Compare with Addidas, Playboy is more fragrant but it is more expensive.
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發表於 12-6-2011 16:14:54 | 顯示全部樓層
LYXX, I am using, i think it is quite good and the smell will not be too strong too!
NakuNaku 發表於 12-6-2011 13:58



In my opinion, it is not necessary to put "too" at the end of your sentence =)

It sounds like "Chinglish".
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發表於 13-6-2011 10:50:34 | 顯示全部樓層
I think you better go with him, as I think men may not like too smelly....
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