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Activity---Self-Introduction.... Start! (Example at #1)

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發表於 27-7-2008 17:55:22 | 只看該作者
Hello, Nakuz members, my name is Wing.
First you need to prepare that , my English is poor.
Okay. Let’s start .
Don't look my name misunderstood I am a female. Actually I am a male.
I am fifteen years old, but I will have birthday in October 26
My family has five members. They are very nice.
I live in a Hong Kong and I was born in Hong Kong too.
I am a F.5 student. My favorite subjects are Chinese and Accounting
And I like drawing and playing chess.
However I will play basketball with my friends.
Also I hope I will have a beautiful girl friend. T^T
That all I Introduce myself .
Thank you for your eyes looked this poor English Self Introduction.

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12#
發表於 27-7-2008 19:44:33 | 只看該作者
Well,my name is Angel b‥◆,this is just translated from my account's name straightly (just see this as a joke...)
You may call me LH or JC or anything else.(But don't be some ugly,strange name,please)
Well,I won't tell you my gender,so just guess it.
I am fourteen years old and I will be a F.4 student in the next academic year.
(My birthday is on 31st December,so all of you know what to do :lol )
There are six members in my family,my parents,my grandma,my brother,my sister and I.
I live in Kwai Chung and I also study in a school in Kwai Chung. So this is convenient for me to go to school.
I have many interests and I like science,history,psychology...etc. My favourite subject is Chemistry.
I try to listen more songs now and I like the English songs most.
I like surfing the Net and go to the forums. I think this can improve my critical thinkings.
I want to be a scientist and a writer in the future.Although this dream seems to be difficult to complete,I will try my best to fulfill it.
My English standard is just poor,so there may be some grammar mistakes.But still I enjoy joining this activity.(For the marks? lol) Thanks.

[ 本帖最後由 天使b‥◆ 於 27-7-2008 20:01 編輯 ]

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13#
發表於 27-7-2008 20:20:09 | 只看該作者
Hello every one,
my name is David,
I'm 14 year-old.
And I am a boy= =
I kenn at playing table tennis,
so that I have a strong body = =
As I was 12year-old,
once I had to chat with members of Nakuz..
and I think someof the members are kind,some aren't.
I live in a family where it is harmonious,
my parents are care about me,
so that I am very glad.
Last, I hope you can give me more points,
think you.

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發表於 27-7-2008 21:03:46 | 只看該作者
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15#
發表於 27-7-2008 22:16:36 | 只看該作者
Hello,my name is raymond,a thirteen-year-old boy.
My family has 5 members,me,mum,dad and two sisters.
My favourite food is chocolate ice-cream
I live in Tseung Kwan O,nevertheless,I chose a school in Hong Sing Garden because I hate Tseung Kwan O such a boring place.
If I study in Kowloon,I can go to Mongkok in which I can find what I like,mobile phones,for instance.
I am interested in chinese and I.T.
I like I.T. just because I like playing computer games

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16#
發表於 27-7-2008 22:46:56 | 只看該作者
Surprisingly, I can join an activity in Nakuz without any restriction.
You may call me Fantasma and I am one of the supermoderators of Nakuz.
If you have any problems, please feel free to contact me.

I am now studying in a university and have a lot of fruitful memory in it.
In university life, team work is very important. Without it, you cannot do your homework well.
Sometimes I am quite lazy so that I will pass some homework to my schoolmates.
Actually, university life is a challenge for me, but I enjoy it very much.
It gives me a lot of freedom to do everything.
Therefore, if you want to have such kind of memory, please put more effort in your A-level.

I understand that A-level is the most difficult exam in secondary school life.
I could also get a good result. Why can't you get it? Your future life is controled by you now.

I like music very much and get a Grade 8 guitar (distinction) award from ABRSM.
When I am free or getting tired, I play my guitar at home and feel very comfortable.
Music can bring a bright memory fresh to me.
Therefore, I suggest you listen to music for a short time when you have great pressure.

Life is in your hands. Do more and you will get more. Good luck to everyone!

[ 本帖最後由 Fantasma 於 27-7-2008 22:57 編輯 ]

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17#
發表於 28-7-2008 11:21:44 | 只看該作者
Hello everybody!I am a member of this forum too.You can call me Tim.

I'm a 14-year-old boy.My pastime is so simple--playing computer games.

And my home member has 6.They're my mum,my dad,and 3 sisters.

I am so thin and I always gets sick easily because I don't like to take exercise.

My favourite subjects are Chinese and English(that's why I come in).

My favourite animals are dogs and hamster.I like the kind of dog which called Pug,

it looks like a n elder.That's so funny,right?And I'm feeding my hamster just now,it looks

very cute too.So that's why I love these two animals.

My defect is I always have a day-dreaming when I am taking the lessons at school.

So my results are not so good.But my parents do not blame me everytime.So I will not

get very unhappy after the exam.Certainly,I love my home members very much  because

they don't give me any pressure everytime.I always feel happy in my daily life.

That's the end of my introduction.Thank you!

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18#
發表於 28-7-2008 11:29:57 | 只看該作者
Hi, my name is Tommy.
I am senventeen years old.
I am a boy.
I love playing ball games and computer games.
I don't have any girl friend and.
I should not tell you my secret details.

That's all.
Thank you.

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發表於 28-7-2008 12:19:04 | 只看該作者
HI..My name is Nick
I am 14 years old
I have a borther.He is older than me.
I live in Wong Tai Sin Upper.
I study in Ho Lap College, it is in San Po Kong.
My favourite Star is Ayu, she is beautiful
My favourite sport is nothing! I don't like playing sports.
I hope I can be a doctor because I think doctor is cool, it can help people!
I still single, but i don't want to have a girl friend in this time.

OK..THANK YOU

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發表於 28-7-2008 12:50:32 | 只看該作者
hello,my name is Aaron,iam a boy.I am 15-year-old.I live in Kowloon.I have a brothers.I aloso have girlfriend,her name is Suki,we love each other very much.lMy school is located in Ho Man Tin.My hobby is playihg piano and playing sports.I always play basketball in weekends.That's all i want to say,thank you!

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