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Activity---Self-Introduction.... Start! (Example at #1)

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發表於 27-7-2008 12:36:13 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
Q1. What should I write?
A1. Introduce yourself.You may talk about some basic information such as age,gender and so forth.We also welcome writing your own attitude towards politics,life,science,etc. as your attitude towards these stuff may let the others understand you more.

Q2. What will be the reward.
A2. Basic reward of 10 points.Bonus will be awarded to those without any grammatical mistakes or with rich content.

Q3. Can I write in point form?
A3. No,the introduction should be written in complete sentence.Those not in complete sentence will be penalised.

The activity has started,you may introduce yourself in this post
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Example
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Hello,my name is piyopiyo,a sixteen-year-old boy.
My family has 3 members,me,mum and dad.We have close relationship with one another.
My favourite food is the coffee-flavoured ice-cream of Haagen-Dazs.
I live in Tai Po,nevertheless,I chose a school in Kowloon because I hate Tai Po such a boring place.
If I study in Kowloon,I can go to Mongkok in which I can find what I like,mobile phones,for instance.
I am interested in law,finance,economic and history.
I like law just because I think the barristers are cool!!!
For finance and economic,I am interested in them due to my belief that,only smart investment can give u a stable life.
Even a guy who can earn 100k per month,I still don't believe he can have a long-term luxurious lives without smart investment!
I love living in Hong Kong such a cosmopolitan city where I can meet people from different country.
I love Central especially the commerical district where IFC stands because I can entirely feel Hong Kong,to feel how cosmopolitan Hong Kong is.
Therefore I would like to study Global Business in University,I hope that one day I can work in the commerical district in Central.
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Example (another one) by hixyz111
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G'day, my name is Gordon(real name, call me Lt. Conti), a fourteen-year-old boy.
Our family consist of my mum and my dad. My father has been working in China since I was born
so I seldom meet him. We often talk on the phone though. My mum has been living with me for years so I have a closer bond
with my mother than my dad( Yep, they are still married FYI).
My favourite food is fresh pasta served with Frankfurts(A kind of sausage) and tomato sauce.
I live in Blackburn, Victoria of Australia. It is really nice place to live in, fresh air and less noice.
I love studying Physics and Chemistry. I reckon that they are very useful for the human beings and I want to contribute to the Earth.
I might consider jobs in IT or Physic when I finish my Master.

[ 本帖最後由 hixyz111 於 27-7-2008 23:28 編輯 ]
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發表於 27-7-2008 12:48:53 | 只看該作者
Hi, my name is Jacky.
I am fifteen years old.
I am a boy.
I love playing ball games.
I have no girl friend and my telephone number...
I should not tell you.

That's all.
Thank you.

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參與人數 1樂點 +23 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 23 加少左,文法全對 +10分

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發表於 27-7-2008 13:02:02 | 只看該作者
My age is 14 .
My home has father ,mother and sister.
i like art most!
I feel that the art can give me free and creations space .
My father does business ,now in Philippines .
I feel that my father is very good because  i want what he will give .
My mother is a housewife ,the time being free will go shopping with friend .
I feel that my mother is also very good ,because in the daily life, only she then wills washs the dishes and do laundry and sweep floor .
But my sister just love eating.
I feel that my  sister is that the whole family is the most lazy !
I have a best friend !
Her name calls ADA LEUNG .
She usually keeps company with me ,especially at my upset time .
I am a lot of to thank her !



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參與人數 1樂點 +14 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 14 basic + 7pts x 0.5, round up = 14

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發表於 27-7-2008 13:05:41 | 只看該作者
Hi, my name is Any thing were gone§Dragon Boy.
I am fifteen years old.
I am a boy.
I love playing ball games,computer games,psp and listen to music.
And I love to Masturbation everyday
My favorite bands are The Click Five,Simple Plan and My Chemical Romance.
My favorite singers are Eric Dill,Eason Chan and Siu Fat.
I without girlfriend and boy friend,and I feel very lonely now.
And my telephone number is...
I would not tell you,because I don't know who you are.

That's all of my presentation.
Thank you for your kind attention.

[ 本帖最後由 一切已過§龍仔 於 27-7-2008 13:13 編輯 ]

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piyopiyo + 15 basic + 0.5 x 7pts,round off + 1pts for

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發表於 27-7-2008 15:35:05 | 只看該作者
My Chinese name is da he, English name is Tim.

I live in Diamond Hill where is not developed,lack of park and square.

I am a boy who love sunlight,so I always train to run and swim.

Moreover,I hate online game very much because I deem that it waste my time.

I adore Chinese literature,I want to be a poet and a teacher because I think that is more meaningful.

Recantly,I am planing F.6 promotion.I want to choose AL Chinese Literatur and AL GEOG but I am not idea to choose which AS subject I want.

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參與人數 1樂點 +16 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 16 0.5 x 12pts

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發表於 27-7-2008 15:43:18 | 只看該作者
Hi, my name is King
I am fourteen years old.
I am a boy.
I love playing football with my friends ,computer games,example: shooting and action gamespsp and listen to music.
And I love to
My favorite food is chips and ice-cream
I like playing chess with my father and i always help my mother to do housework
I will do my best in my school result because my mother hope my job is a doctor
That's all of my introduction
Thank you for your kind attention.

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參與人數 1樂點 +14 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 14 basic + 0.5 x 7pts ,round off

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發表於 27-7-2008 16:01:53 | 只看該作者
Hello,I am Yannie.
I am sixteen years old and I am a secondary five student.
I am a girl.
I live in Tin Shui Wai.
Listening songs is my hobby.
My favourite food is chocolate because it is sweet and delicious.
I have a brother who is fourteen years old.

That's all for my introduction.
I hope you know more about me.

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參與人數 1樂點 +24 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 24 basic+0.5x7pts,round off+grammar(10)

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發表於 27-7-2008 16:52:17 | 只看該作者
my name is crazy man.
i do not have real name.
as my name, i am crazy.
i am 16years old.
i don't know whether i am boy or girl.
i like playing computer games.
recently i 'm playing fez
this is a online game
although online game will make me addicted,i feel it's a alternative knid of game
so i start to play this excellent game
that's the end
i had a long time that i did not write any article in english

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參與人數 1樂點 +13 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 13 basic + 0.5x6pts

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發表於 27-7-2008 17:03:38 | 只看該作者
HI Guys,My name is Flower Daddy but it isn't my true name.
My friend always call me SoF.
I am fifteen years old.
I am a boy.
I live in Kwai Chung.
My favorite pop star is Will Smith
I love sleeping and sleeping.
I haven't any brother or sister.
My lover is piyopiyo,haha
that's all.thank you

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參與人數 1樂點 +14 收起 理由
piyopiyo + 14 basic +0.5 x 8pts -.-...

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發表於 27-7-2008 17:20:02 | 只看該作者
Hello ! My name is YIN . I am a girl and I am 14-year-old.
I want to get points so I reply this post. I like playing
online games for exsample Jx2 online , R2BEAT etc.
When I am free I will surf on Nakuz. This's the end of my
post thank you .

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piyopiyo + 13 basic + 0.5 x 6pts

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